Belle mad belle angry belle crush

[brentjoyce]

"Bella looked odnw at him and smiled.
She then placed the hebs on his cuts and bruises.
"They will help you heal faster." She said as she pressed the warm cloth down.
She then got up again, "Hold on i just thought of something."
She went to the back yard and found a rose.
She took off the petals and crushed them into a paste, adding water and a few other things here and there.
She then came back to Andrew, "My grandma taugh me this before she died."
She rubbed it over the cuts and the pain left Andrew"

OK seriously you can't start every sentence with she, that is like fifth grade writing. It is absurd that you guys, being the grammar whores you are, put up with this shit. I mean she write worse then i do and that is saying a lot. I mean come on you can replace the sentence
"She went to the back yard and found a rose."

with something like

In the back of the yard Belle found herself picking up a blood red rose. Making sure not to damage teh delicate flower she snapped it close to the lower stem. Turning back, she looking over her shoulder and made her way back to the front of the yard.

Even that sucks but at least it doesn't start with she
she
she
she
she
she
she


AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

FUCK

[theliontamer♥]

omgbrentiloveyou

[glamorousgnome]

ahahahhha that just totally made my day....

and andrew's too.

he's laughing his sexy british ass off...

WHAT THE HELL


ahhahahaha

i think that part of reign's history should henceforth becalled THE DARK AGES

or the REAL reign of terror.

[brentjoyce]

umm can everyone see this? Like guests?

[lions_go_rawr]

yup.

the wall of shame board is not just for this post in particular, but for posts that we all regret doing ourselves.

[brentjoyce]

gosh i guess everything i ever post will go on this wall then.